I'm greatly enjoying this story. I can't wait until the next chapter!
Inuyasha needs to be tormented and tortured, I am also glad his and Kikyo's plan will not pan out.  Kikyo will remain a pile of rubbish and not take the form of Kagome.  She died 50 or more years ago and should remain that way. 
      
princess of the western lands (Chapter 2) - Thu 21 Jan 2016 
I wonder if sesshomaru heard kagome's shreik as she dissapeared? If sesshomaru should find inuyasha on his lands, what will inu say as his excuse for being there? what will he tell the rest of the tachi now that he can't even bring back a body? what's happening to kagome? what will kikyo say when inuyasha returns to her empty handed? 
  
update soon onegai 
  
ja ne 
      
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Thu 21 Jan 2016 
i am very intrigued. would love to see where you go with this 
      
 Holy cow, even though I wasn't a big fan of one massive paragraph... You, my dear, have a fantastic way of words. How sad it was to read her thoughts as she fought death. My goodness the feels! You put so much raw emotion into this piece. I truely hope you continue writing. You have so much potential. Is this your first fanfiction?  
      
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