OK now I can comment the first chap had to little but with the second added I can say interesting
Oh! Another good one. I can now see that he tries to destroy her with his acid because of spite - refusal to admit that she is his soul mate... If I were you, I would almost fast forward through key moments of their interactions interspersed with him spying on the group...you know to unravel her enigmatic ways...
I like it when they start from the beginning!!
tonya (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Feb 2016
love to see where you go with this
Loveyaa (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Feb 2016
Hahaha...I can only imagine the thoughts that go through Sesshoumaru's head. Things just got complicated. I can't wait to see where this story goes and what happens next :)
Pamela (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Feb 2016
So far very promising:)
Saiya (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Feb 2016
Oh Ya they did. Getter Fluffy.
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Feb 2016
AWESOME start!!
Looking forward to more!
You're off to a great start! I can't wait to see where you take this, especially Kagome's reaction to it all.
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