Ok, I'm hooked. I love the premise, I love your style. Please please continue:) 

Well that certainly got my attention.

I love it! Great start so far & I hope you update quick!  It really has my interest. 

Cliffy

Awesome, I wonder if Touga was in spirit form or if he to came back.  And what about Miroku did his father come back to him or does he just lay unconscious without getting a miracle like the others.  Where was Rin, Jaken and Ah Un?  Well, hopefully you can update again soon.

OK well written .don't know what else to say about this.

Interesting

Oooh, color me intrigued! What an interesting way to start a story! Great hook. Looking forward to more.

Hhhmmmmnn??? Out of body experience or an in the veil  kinda thing, maybe??? Very descriptive. I could picture it. And how did she get in that cave with the big dog himself? I like it. I think you should take it for a run and see where it goes!!

I really like the marbles glued to the face description, it was awesom. :)