I like how the story is progressing so far; I'm eager to read the next chapter. I also hope that in the future we'll learn exactly what was written in the letter Inuyasha left for Kagome. I feel something is suspicious with the whole deal of Kouga taking in Kagome should anything happen to Inuysha. Keep up the good work! 
      
Longer chapters please 
      
Ree-san (Chapter 2) -  Tue 18 Oct 2016 
I'm hoping that Kouga's humiliation and death comes soon.  Painfully and gruesomely soon.   
      
Katie (Chapter 2) -  Tue 18 Oct 2016 
I love how youade Kouga shake in his boots a bit! I only wish the chapter was linger so I could find out what happens! 
      
I look forward to seeing this story develop! I like the spin you've set up. Please keep on going, I feel like this is going to be a good one! 
      
Leaora (Chapter 1) -  Sun 16 Oct 2016 
This is an intruiging start. I am hooked already! 
      
Interesting start.  You don't often see her go to Kouga instead of Lord Fluffy after Inuyasha dies.  Can't wait to see where this goes. 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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