Nooooo!!!! Why must you leave cliffies. ???????? Anyway this was a good chapter. You mentioned Sesshomaru's mom being at dinner. But you didn't mention her. Please update soon
Every chapter pulls me deeper into the story. I really didn't want the chapter to end. Really glad he didn't rape her. I'm also wondering if Toga or Sesshomaru senced something wrong with Kagome. Updated soon 
      
This is a great first chapter. I like the idea of Sesshomaru not knowing about Kagome's family problems. Please updated soon. 
      
I am hooked!  This story has a wonderful beginning.  You did a great job reeling the reader in and wanting more at the end of the chapter.  Please update soon.  I cannot wait for the next chapter! 
      
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