You did a wonderful job to a simple suggestion. It was brilliant and the lemon scene was enthralling. Your writing skills are top-notched. You have become one of my favorite writers and I look forward to more updates to this fascinating story. Excellent writing, keep it up. Oh by the way, I love the plot and the story of course. 
Maybe a little back story on Kagome and Shippo and how they ended up Sessho's home before her fateful encounter with what seems to beher destiny now. Is she going to be a normal human or is she a miko with powers that she knows nothing about yet; something like now that she is mated, her dormant powers will awaken. 
  
Thank you for reading my ramblings. lol   :) 
      
disa (Chapter 2) - Sun 27 Nov 2016 
I was so interested in reading this fanfic but then you had to have him rape her.  Well good luck with the story. 
      
Noooo poor Kagome (!_!) I know Sesshomaru-sama will fall for her, but hope she won't be too much hurt by him. 
I think this will be a wonderful story (^_^) Thank you for the quick update dear~ 
  
      
Kagome (Chapter 2) -  Sun 27 Nov 2016 
Oh my!!! Needles to say my attention is captured!! 
  
      
xDori (Chapter 1) - Sun 27 Nov 2016 
Uh oh! Will Kagome give in easily? Hmmm. Not likely? Lol. Compliant but defiant? Interesting first chapter! Can't wait for more  
      
smilingfool (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Nov 2016 
wow what a wonderful story line...  I enjoyed it very much... Please continue I want to see what Sesshomaru has in store for Kagome.  Must be a good one... lol... 
      
Miss C (Chapter 1) -  Sat 26 Nov 2016 
Well this escalated quickly!! 
      
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