whoops  . . intriguing like always!

I am intrigued by your story. It is nicely written and it seems to be flowing in continuity nicely also. I believe I will enjoy reading this story. As for the last paragraph of this chapter, I have a simple idea albeit a last minute thought...Sessho mates Kagome right then and there. They can either consummate it now or a little later on that night after maybe making a deal with Kagome or not giving her any options. But seeing that Kagome may be a strong willed person, he may have to make a deal. lol

Okay you've got me hooked! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Thst's when one expression come to mind

O???? oh sheet!----danger will robinsom DaNgER!!!!

Wow!

Very nice so far, well written! I'll be watching for updates :D

I love your story so far. You still got it!

I hope you have a chance to update soon!

interesting. well I'll be keeping an eye out for more chapters. This looks like it may be good, but only future will tell.