This was very funny, poor Kagome, still cover in demon saliva. Sessh it's actually on character, I imagine him just not taking Kagome with him just like that. 
      
More, please? 
      
I'm really excited to see how this story unfolds. I think it could be a gem. Looking forward to it! 
  
P.S. That first chapter made me burst out laughing and yelling, "No, Kagome!" I could totally see her accidentally doing that. 
      
This chapter was great, I can't wait to read the next chapter, Happy New Year! 
      
More, Happy New Year! 
      
Please update your story 
      
Good chapter, please update the next chapters quickly, Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! 
      
Nice chapter. 
      
Nice to see you back in this story cant wait for the next chapter  
      
Think you could tag this as vore 
      
Deana (Chapter 3) -  Tue 12 Feb 2019 
Interesting story! Can't wait for next update. 
      
Lol poor thing shes having the worse lucm in the world, I wonder if she'll be rescued or be a little spunky with this new monster thing hmmm  
      
Went from chapters to drabble story within 3 chapters. Sorry don’t care for a chapter stories with just a paragraph, find them highly annoying, so I’m out from reading this. 
      
This is awesome the creative writing on the surrounding made me feel like i was in the mouth I really hope you continue  
      
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