| I think that the story is great As Is, I don't think that there is any real reason to change even a part of it.
       
ami (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Oct 2008 
| no demons i think ur story line is perfect the way it is.honestly though either waythe story is good
       
c y m r y (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Oct 2008 
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c y m r y (Chapter 2) - Sun 19 Oct 2008 
| please update
       
c y m r y (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Oct 2008 
| i loved im hoping to see more!!!
       
| i hope to se4e more as well, thats an interesting turn of events, i wonder if Sesshomaru ever found out that Kagome was never a whore. 0o0o or maybe he got married to some bi+ch and has never been happy, always moaning after Kags. That would be great. I kinda wish we could see it from his side. - r0o
       
Jill Dozer (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Oct 2008 
| I definitely want to see more, I already can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
       
| i just love it. and i am hoping with all my heart to read some more
       
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