This story was great and the ending was nice!

Hoping for more?

Great chapter!

So good. I loved every moment of this chapter. I cannot wait for more. Thanks for the update.

Well that was certainly a bold little bit of back and forth. I think the way you have switched between their POVs. Okay officially hooked! 

Very nicely done. A fun little chapter! I think the word you want is shudder not shutter though. 

Well, that was fun! And his beast showed up. Twice as nice!

Woohoo. She has no idea. He is gonna get her too. Love it. Thanks for the update. 

Nice chapter!

Nice love the dirty dreams

I read this story on fanfiction.net, it's a great. I'm glad you posted it here on dokuga so more people can enjoy it!

Oh my. Wow what a dream. I think she may need a cold shower. This is getting good.  Thanks for the update.

I like your story so far. It's a descriptive yet easy read. Especially, how you worked in some erotica but didn't overdo it. However, Sesshomaru smirks a little too much, you know? Like a signature, Sesshomaru smirk or grin once or twice in a chapter is no big deal, but five times can be a bit much. 

I read this story over on FF.net and I loved it.

Very well written with just a minuscule amount of errors. They did not take away from the flow of the story.

I loved the way you developed the relationship between S/K. They were both a bit ooc but in a good way.

Oooh, this was a very sexy and steamy romance also...had to stop and fan myself.  ;)

Looking forward to reading more of your S/K ships that you have written or may write in the future.

Excellent job and welcome to Dokuga.  :)

Cheers!!!

Great chapter. Well written and plenty of detail too. I like the teasing and then pulling back as well. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

Update soon onegai

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