I died when he asked her what a Buyo was????????????????

That was amazing! Great story, I really enjoied reading it!

Gave me just what I needed to get over my writer's block!

Now that's how you write a one shot! A great self contained story that was both sweet and spicy. I loved it!

Good

I normally don't read a lot of fanfics but I'm glad I came across this one-shot.  It was very well done/detailed and might I say hot! ;) 

Awesome!!!!

So is Kagme going to be reunited with Shippo? Would be nice to read an epilogue :)

great story  sorry it's a one shot  would like to have seen her reunited with shippo and run  

keep up the good work

Such a romantic tale.  I liked your ooc portrayal of this Sesshomaru and Kagome.  It sort of fits with your plot.   :)

I hope you will maybe write a sequel or an epiloge depicting the after effects of their mating and Kagome's reunion with Shippo and Rin??  (hint, hint)

Hmmm...Kagome not only newly mated, a wife, mother and grandmother all in one evening.   :)

Nice writing with the exception of a few gr/sp errors but that's okay because you're writing fanfiction for fun and not aiming for a Nobel Prize, right?  LOL  ;)

Great job!

Cheers!!!