You have set up Kagome's character and the story line really well, and I am so excited to discover the lengths in which you will continue to write it! I enjoy guessing what is going to happen next with each chapter update.
Hmmmmmmm.......! X3. The suspense!
Nilee1 (Chapter 4) - Fri 29 Mar 2019
This is an absolutely great story. You are an excellent storytelle. You let your reader feel Kagome’s emotions- her joy and her sadness. Please update soon!
sam (Chapter 3) - Thu 28 Mar 2019
I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Edahj (Chapter 3) - Tue 26 Mar 2019
This is pretty fantastic!
Faith (Chapter 3) - Mon 25 Mar 2019
Your descriptions of how she's dealing with the grief and pain are so en pointe and evocative. I've cried through all 3 chapters. Thank you for including the trigger warning. It's very appreciated. Excellent, thoughtful, and thought provoking writing. I look forward to more chapters. <3
Loving this so far! I love how Kagome is really taking a hold of her life and not just being a sobby pushover.
Tiffany (Chapter 1) - Sat 23 Mar 2019
I am so intrigued by your story. I am literally hanging on your every word. Can’t wait until you post more.
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