I like your first 2 chapters. I like the ideal of her stealing looks at Sesshoumaru and vice versa. I hope you have Kaede teach her to heal good enough to give him his arm back. I so dislike him having only one arm. I hate that part in the anime. I am so overjoyed that you did not put her in that stupid uniform. I also like the idea of the two brothers 'cooperating' with each other enough for Inuyasha to let Sesshoumaru to train him.

Very interesting start, I'm looking forward to reading more. One critique, you sometimes you use "there" when you should use "their".

This plot has been used quite a bit, but you've breathed some well needed freshness into it. Thank you for doing that. By the way, 20 is SOOO not old farty. I'm 20. :P

I like this story. Sounds interesting. Loved Sesshomaru's line "Do not mistake my words for caring, wench." You hit his character right there. ;D The whole "i thought I smelled her rotten corpse" was a bit much. Personally, I would've put something just as mean only more aristocratic "I thought I smelled the stench of death and decay". But, it's your story! ;D

lol, very well done on the training. loved the whole "my ward" part. i was cracking up at that.