Hola. 
  
Esta historia se lee genial, ojalá la continues!!!! 
Gracias 
      
I like how the story is starting out...looking forward to more. 
      
OMG....  that was a nice chapter....  Although the ending having Sesshomaru drive them to his building then later leaving Kagome to her own devices didn't sit well with me but I guess that's how its supposed to be anyway update soon. 
      
A nice begining so far.  Although you misspelled Naraku's name, no worries it happens to the best of us.   
  
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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