| this would of been sweet ramblings if he came upon her sleeping form in the night. but the saddness she has is felt in the setting of the storie. i really love the scene.you should make it a storie.
       
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Nov 2008 
| Wow very pretty, and intense your emotion and description were great. Poor Kagome. I enjoyed it very much! Great job! keep writing it was wonderful!
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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