Wow such an interesting story....  I wonder what will Sesshomaru do with Kagome.....  I bet he will eat her up and well its what she thought anyway....  Can't wait to read what happens next...  Will Kagome arrive home safely or will Sesshomaru have eaten her ....  LOL  

This is an interesting story so far. However, there is a bit of grammar errors that don't allow the story to flow smoothly. 

Other than that, can't wait to see where it goes 

Love that Kagome is a normal size chick

I can't wait for more. Sesshomaru's actions are so very him and yet very confusing. You did a good job portraying Kagomes nervousness during the entire exchange

If I was in that situation, I would be terrified. You did a good job, protraying Sess as  being a predator and Kagome his prey. He is not leaving her a way to escaped. He was kinda creepy, which shows me how this obcession is possible.

I wonder what happen to her friend. Did Sess scare her off, or was it all arranged? I guess I need to keep reading to find out.

Keep up the good work, I am intersted to see where it goes.

love this beginning ?

Interesting. I like it.

But i feel like you dont need to make sesshomaru ooc by making him talk more than he usually would. Thats creepier if you get what i mean.