oooh dark. I like how you used lipstick, grammar, and the theme! Good job. A lot of things for two hundred words and you made it work. I am proud!! 
      
| OH my that has to be......wow. well naraku are you trany bi? LOL i want to know what happens and yet i like how this one ends at the same time. well i hope to read more from you soon. 
hugs and puppies
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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