Holy...I feel a bit traumatized after reading this :'/ It's definitely paying homage to Sesshomaru's dog demon characteristics ^^

I'm sorry to say this but this was a little to creepy for me... and let me tell you I read extremely dark fanfics of this couple. But, all-in-all this was really good. Great job.

this was the sickest thing I ever read.

Sick and absolutely wonderful :)

That was intense.  And well-written.  Not the syrupy-sweet, gallant Sesshomaru we see so often, for sure!

Somehow...He turned Orcish in my mind. Like an orc feasting on a deer. O.o It was almost...undescribable. While it disturbedme, I could not stop reading. Not a fan of Hard Vore, but it truly is a different take on this. Good job, Monti.

Yanno I have a weak tummy...but I made through that fic....and man oh man did it bring out the maschochist in me. I think Smittee is rubbing off LOL....gawds I need to have hubs read that and make him do err.....similiar acts.....*drool* GIRL you can write some painful stuff!! I think Imma have to have you beta my stuff.....^_^

~Ts

While very well written, I feel that the warning should be much larger.  I honestly never read "author's notes", and since it didn't jump off the page at me, I never realized it was a warning until part way through when I went back to check for one.

Wow!  that was gruesome.  gave me the chills... but I loved it.!

I see Sesshomaru is a connoisseur... *urgh*

Yep, that was gory indeed lol. But well, we were warned, and I quite like the conclusion of it. It was nicely written too. I wonder if you're going to write another chapter of this, or if it's going to stay as a one-shot...

Dewa mata