would love for you to be able to make this into a long chapter story, just love it so far :D

Uhhh where's the rest? I love it so far... you do intend to continue it, right??

Kaminoko (c)2011

Please update. I love this story so far. It is really good. So please update. Thanks

This is a really great story! I hope that Kagome really does become Rin's mom, :) and Sesshoumaru Shippo's dad. :) Please update soon.

ya'no i'm kinda put out by the fact dat you hav' yet to go past the terd chapta' as of yet, seeing as I hav' been followen' dis story since A-S-S.com an' wish ta no wat' hap'ens nex'. update'n wooda been nice since dat was las' don' in April.

This was an awesome story. You should really write chapter two, this story's just too good to be left as it is

ah ues  I remmerb  this I squealed in hapyness when I saw it  please update  soon the  edits  are  good

I really liked this story!! My best parts i think would have to be when Sesshomaru is teaching Shippo, that's just cute! I loved that the chapter was long and fill of details for a good basis to your story!!

Hope you do another chapter soon as i look forward to reading the rest of this.

This was really good, I never got the chance to read in on SS but I'm glad I saw it here. Though there were a few spelling/word errors here and there it was very well done. The subtle additions of character bits like the kimono and the detail you put into Sesshoumaru teaching Shippou how to hunt and things adds alot to the character development of the story. I can't wait to read more of this! you've got me thoroughly hooked!

MontiK