Your story's good so far! I'm really loving the way Sesshomaru and Kagome met...I can't wait to see where this goes.

Hahaha I loved this! This is totally how I think and exactly as I envisioned Kagome as. You should totally be proud of it. Not everyone could use all of those words in a one shot and make it as good as this is. Keep up the great work!

Hahah good job :D I really like where you took this. It's okay that you went over the word count [I probably wouldn't have been able to do it myself either!] this one shot was great. Hope you write for next weeks challenge, I'd really like to see what you can do!