*Cries that was beautiful! Your description and flow were wonderful. It was enthralling to say the least. I find myself searching for a next button but alas it is not there. I will wait here until you add more. Well done. The only think i noticed is tht you over used a couple words. YOu shouldn't use a single word too many times. Like "Dirk" you used quite a bit. It reminded me of tales of symphonia though...sorry random. but great job keep it up!!