oh snap birthday sex! lol

This is so good!! thanks so much for writing this, it is sweet and sexy and so true to life.

Well, you know MY thoughts on this--as I commented elsewhere, too. But as I said before, I want others to know that I enjoyed this. For a first timer, you did a wonderful job. I knew there was some smut in there just aching to get out! :) When I first read it, I couldn't believe this was your first time to write a lemon and you did it in days as where, for me, it took over a month to write my first. Wow. I do believe I've created a monster that I'm going to very much enjoy. 

Why haven't I ever got a massage like that on my birthday?  I think I've been missing out.  Fabulous story!  Hope you write more soon.

YAY for SMUT!  PWP... or anything else people want to call it.  Sometimes, we just need a little descriptive lovin!

Nice job...

Amber