I have to agree with BlueHeavensAngel.  The story is wonderful, but very difficult to read due to the miss-spelled words.

I really love your story and am sticking it out regardless.

Saying I love you doesn't always mean a lot. It helps to hear it, but being showed is so much more. Why can't he say it, if he can show her, questions and more questions. Sesshounaru is strange. Great chapter!

I really like this story, but I have to be honest and say that it was so littered with misspelled words that it was very hard to finish the chapter.  I actually almost gave up a few times, but I like the story so I stuck it out.  There are far too many errors for me to be specific so I would just suggest rereading it yourself and using spellcheck.

I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but this is just one of those things that irk me.  I still look forward to reading the rest of the story.

Oh No...Souta is gone! I'll bet it was the man she seen on the stairs, maybe not. Could be one of Sesshoumaru's old girl friends!

Great Chapter

I surprised myself.  Not by sitting and reading this story from start til now, but by the fact that I read this far into a story where everyone is human.  Normally I avoid those stories like the plague.  I guess the theme of the story caught my eye and the more I read the more I was caught even though it feels that a part of Sesshoumaru's personality is missing without his demon half.  I will continue to stay with the story even though I disagree with any author who has something against leaving the demons in their personalities whether that was your intention or not. 

He's right on the edge of giving into his love for her but his distrust of love is holding him back and will eventually begin to take it's toll on her.  I have a feeling it's going to come back and bite him in the butt.  I don't know how you have it planned for him to be humbled in someway to make him realize his love for her.  But I have a feeling it's going to take something extra to make him open up his heart completely to her.

Will Sesshou ever tell Kagome that he loves her? And how long will it be before this arranged deal ends or becomes soo much more for the both of them? I look forward to what Kagome has in store of Sesshou. Keep up the good work and update soon :P

Well, having read your A/N, I understand why this is in the condition it is in. You were writing too fast and needed to get busy studying. At least you have your priorites straight: write for us and THEN study! LOL. But these errors were egregious and such things  drive me crazy, as I am anal retentive. Please don't be offended. I wouldn't have taken the time to do this if you weren't such a good writer and if this wasn't such a good story.

He stopped when he spied a bag laying under Kagome's side of the bed, pushed way up against the wall, beneath the headboard; as if she were trying to hid it from him.

Sesshomaru sat down on the bed; feeling as though the floor had fallen away and that the walls had closed in on him.

"Tell you what?" Kagome asked, not believing that he could have found out about the babe yet.

Sesshomaru took a step aside and she saw the stuff from the pharmacy laying on the bed.

"No, Kagome I..." Sesshomaru was cut off at her cry.

"I do want this, Kagome. I really do.

"Damn it, Kagome, I am sorry. I didn't mean to make you cry."

My appointment's today and he is the best."

With each word out of her mouth his face darkened and his eyes? caught fire.

When she was [quite] quiet once more

"Sesshomaru it's..."

Sesshomaru gentled the kiss and then broke [form] from her,

Sesshomaru raised a shaking hand to his mouth and took a breath.

Folding up her clothes, she

"I am going to examine your breasts for any lumps or disfigurations that could signal a

Kagome didn't breathe.

Healthy breasts are important not just for the babe but [as] also for you as well.

So let's make sure

fiance's should be fiances as it is plural, not possessive.

Honestly, he did care that he touched the sequestered parts of women every day. Don't you mean didn't?

Naraku slipped the glove on and rested his other hand? on her belly.

and scribbled something else

Sesshomaru helped Kagome off the table and handed her her clothes.

Just a look [form] from him could do that to her and now? that he[r] was riled and giving her those looks

Taking in all her curves hidden behind her clothes.

Just do a search/replace finding cloths and making it clothes.

He softer as she did what he asked of her. There's a word missing here.

"Take [is] it off!"

she smirked softly at the evidence of what her little teaser was doing to him.

Then[,] she started on his tie and then tossed [is] it to some corner of the

naked [torso's] torsos together

Suddenly he set her [form] from him

before she [slide] slid her tightening fist up

Kagome [hallowed] hollowed

When he finally [designed] deigned

He [slide] slid his hands

The [tortuous] torturous muscle You may wish to change tortuous to torturous. From Dictionary.com: Torturous refers specifically to what involves or causes pain or suffering: prisoners working in the torturous heat; torturous memories of past injustice. Some speakers and writers use torturous for tortuous, especially in the senses “twisting, winding” and “convoluted”: a torturous road; torturous descriptions. Others, however, keep the two adjectives (and their corresponding adverbs) separate in all senses: a tortuous (twisting) road; tortuous (convoluted) descriptions; torturous (painful) treatments.

dragging out her orgasm and pushing up of another. Huh? What did he do?

and her legs wrapping tightly around his ?waist?.

and [makeing] making her body [wither] writhe and quiver Sorry, pet peeve. Wither is what leaves and flowers do when they die. Writhe is what Kagome does when she's....

Sesshomaru moved his weight from

making [over] love to her

he would most [defiantly] definitely not get Kagome

many of [which] whom would tear

Wow, pregnancy is strangely sexy for this version of Kagome.  Awesome writing!  And now I'm wondering about Naraku, errr, Dr. Onigumo.  Maybe he will be a good doctor, or maybe his interest in Kagome will become a problem...  I can't wait to find out which it will be!

This story gives me multiple personality disorder, because part of me thinks Sesshomaru is all on board for Kagome and even a baby, while a little voice whispers in my ear "I'm not so sure about that".  I can't even put my finger on it.  There was one little sentence a chapter or two ago, and now I don't quite trust the guy, no matter how nice he seems.  I'm afraid he's going to let her down...  PS:  HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY?

awesome!!! I like where this is going I just wish she would of told him already... :D

Very interesting story so far! I'm a bit sad for Kagome that Sesshomaru hasn't returned her feelings verbally. I mean, I know he does have feelings  for her, but he hasn't said it.

 really  good story..your  doing a great job    you might want to fix  chapter 15 though  the sentences are streached across the screen  if your useing html you might want to remobe the "BR"  it might help

update soon

love the story cant wait for the next chapter but um...whats up with the format???

hey, is it just me, or is this chapter formatted weird?  I can't read it.

please updata

My, my my... I will have you know I am most certainally pleasantly surprised at how this story has progressed.  I am enjoying myself immensely, and and hopeing you will update soon.  Kudos!

Inumaru_Rapture

Good story so far the only thing really wrong is that 500 yen is only about $5 so thats some pretty cheap rent.