It's a really good first chapter,I can't wait to see what happens next.

I used to have a Bernese Mountain Dog! It's not the most common breed; do you have one? I started reading this on a single spark a while back--glad you are putting it here. I like the sense of humor you are imparting--intelligent, fun, but not childish. Very enjoyable!

Thank you so much! For a while I've been caught up in school and haven't been able to do any writing. But I've already began the next chapter for this story, so I hope to post soon. I actually do have a Bernese Mountain dog named Bear (the same as in the story)...LOVE him to death.