Wonderful! looking forward to the next chaper. ^-^

I think this is a great story, keep up the good work!

http://dokuga.com/rules -> Story Posting -> Chapter Stories. Minimum chapter story chapter length is 700 words per chapter, so you have no worries on that account ^.^

And another awesome chapter there. I was laughing so hard when I read how Kagome got back at Inuyasha for daring to order her around! Does this mean our beloved little spitfire of a priestess doesn't have to go Sesshomaru's castle, or will the baka hanyou be able to force/coax her to follow the creed? I also wonder what will Sesshomaru's reaction be when he finally meets Kagome.

On the side note: And Sesshomaru and his council are worried how a human would perform the duties of a wife of a daiyokai when none of his yokai wives do their own duties? Hypocrites, all of them!

Please, update soon-ish, I wanna know more!

I love it! So well written, I can't wait to read more!

Nuu... Poor Kagome, you're in big trouble now!

She could always try to plead with miko/houshi leaders to release her from the bridal creed, since she is a miko afterall (and if I'm following the storyline at all, she has a much more important duty to the world than be a bride to arrogant, prideful daiyokai...) and as such, becoming a daiyokai's wife would deny her from her priestess duties, right?

Or, she could just fail the tests set for the candidates on purpose and be done with it? Though I think Maru would see through it, but there's nothing he can do about it, ne? Law is a law, and she failed...

Eagerly waiting for a new update on this one!

Really interesting so far

i love the 2 chapters so far. and i'm willing to bet that this would be long story. hopefully, you won't be like the others that start a good story then end up hanging up on us. since a good story always have a good ending, i'm wishing that i'll be seeing that. i wish that you'll update soon though, so that there would be something to hook us up more for this story.

Fantastic idea for a story, kind of like a cross between Shrek and Cinderella, but in this case Cinderella is being dragged to the ball! Like Shrek, I think there will be friendship blooming between the two of them. Cannot wait to see how the four demoness wives handle this new one: will one of them become an ally? Please update as soon as you can. Great job

I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOVE THIS !!!!!!! :D :D The way you portray the characters is amazing, and each word has me hanging...

I really really really can't wait for the next chapters ! :D

Hooray! You updated!

Oh no, poor Kagome. She wasn't expecting this to happen. Sesshoumaru, don't be such a Negative Nancy. You never know what might happen.

Keep up the beautiful work!

- CA

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this kinda sad now :\ its only chapter 2. i'm gunna need him to be sat soon =x

okay i'm totally amused by this fic, and now that mean you have a fiction stalker >:3 Im apounce you via reviews every time you update now >:3 muwhahahahahahahaha LOVE this! more! *wiggles bribery c0okie at you*

WOW

I have to say -  a lot of the recent entries on this website have been awful... but your story looks truly promising...

Please update soon!

Really interesting pot! You've got my attention... =]

I really love this! Interesting begining. can't wait to see what will happen next!

please, update soon!

I find it hard to believe this first chapter is also your first try .  It is a promising begining,  and i would very much like to know more, read more, enjoy more....

Are you sure this is your first fic? Definately doesn't seem like it. It is very good I loved it and I'm looking forward to the rest of your story.

i definitely like it. Looking forward to the next one! ^-^

Wow. I really like this. It's very promising, and I like that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha appear to have a good relationship between them

Can't wait for more. And keep up the beautiful work.