Very, very interesting. I love the way you write Kagome and I definitely would love to read more of this story.  
      
I liked this very much. It made me laugh and I think you caught their personalities very well. Nice job. 
      
Aimee, this is one of your best! I thoroughly enjoyed it. Heck, I was laughing so hard I almost fell off my barstool! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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