Don't ever say you're not good at something and therefore you can't do it. You won't know until you try. This bit here was well done. It only takes a push farther for you to go the rest of the way. I believe in you!! And if you're really nervous, check out some published authors or your favorite fanfic authors and go from there. My favorite is Clive Barker -- that guy knows how to write a sex scene. The ones in "Imajica" are the best written I've ever seen, and beyond even the sex stuff, Barker's stories are amazing.
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