It's a great story really. Tough you should use big letters at the start of a sentence and . , ? ! - marks at the end of one. It makes reading more easy and enjoyable. I'm looking foward to the next chapter.
amy (Chapter 4) - Sat 06 Nov 2010
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Tsuki (Chapter 3) - Sat 30 Oct 2010
Yay :) you updated! That was a really good chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work!
amy (Chapter 3) - Sat 30 Oct 2010
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jojo661538 (Chapter 2) - Tue 14 Sep 2010
hehehe wow so she remembers rin and sesshoumaru and what a miko is but she doesnt want to remember or more specifically her name very ibteresting anyways keep up the good work i hope to read more soon
Tsuki (Chapter 2) - Sun 12 Sep 2010
This is interesting so far, I just think you should be a little more detailed :P
*gives you a cookie* :D
I Said a-boom-a-chick-a-rock-a-chick-a-rock-a-chick-a-boom!
^_^ LOVE that song! (if that IS even what the boomachicka's were..... -_-")
ANYWAYS! cool chapter! i'm gonna read the rest now
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