Interesting begining. It has promise and the notion of a leather and latex covered Kagome is interesting. Your writing style is nice and while I love kouga the oogling is quite appropriate and in character (and gave me a good laugh). I can't wait for more chapters as this looks to be interesting! 
      
NA (Chapter 1) -  Tue 07 Sep 2010 
awesomeness, update soon 
      
BWAHAHAAHAHAHAH.  Memorizing her address.  That's hilarious.  Looovee you Jo! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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