(Review thing cut my review short, here is the rest) There should be a comma and you forgot to capitalize the "I" again. You should go over them and fix it, it is a bit distracting. Other than those sorts of problems, this story is damn interesting.

hii pls update soon dont mind people saying about commas ad capital letter its not a school paper to notice those hahahahaha your story is wonderful have been waiting for so long heheheheh

I'd like to note that my review was completely an educational/hopefully helpful review. =P

yes yes....Radio. Now shoo and edit!

yay my favorite author is back. :D awesome new chapter. I am having to reread this tale since its been soo long

Miss blue! I need your personal email to send these microsoft word files :D Onegaishimasu? >_view-talking.