This was amazing! I love the fact that it was your first fan fic (even though I would have NEVER known) and that you chose to leave it as it was to show your growth. I think the story was fantastic and that it moved smoothly from one setting to the next. Your characters had growth and a deep emotional bond that touched me as a reader. I thought it was well thought out and done perfectly. The "love" scene was touching and you could "feel" what they were both going through. Very very nicely done! Great Job!!!