i really liked the story, as the plot was good and well written...but wasnt he turned human? I didnt read her turning him back at any point so im a bit confused. Did i miss something?  
      
AMY (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Jul 2010 
WONDERSUL 
      
Strawberry12 (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Jun 2008 
| That was really good. Long, but really interesting. I think you should write more, and like make it into a story. If you want you should post it up at www. justexpressing .com. I'm sure people would love it there. :D
       
 (Chapter 1) -  Mon 09 Jun 2008 
| Hmmm....I've thought about making a sequel...but I wouldn't know how to make it not boring
       
akia (Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Jun 2008 
| I love it write more chapter's hope for you to update soon XD
       
akia (Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Jun 2008 
| can u make a sequel to this? XD
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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