I like this story so far :)  I was very, very happy that she cut off her hair, instead of something else.  When I read that she was goiing to the forest with a knife, I was dreading the idea that she was going to attempt suicide, only to be stopped by Sesshoumaru.  No offense to other people who use that plot device, but I just never saw Kagome as the suicidal type.  I've always thought she had too much moxy for that.  So needless to say, I thought her defiant act of cutting off her hair as a vent for her anger and sadness was much, much more in character.  I think your writing has a good flow to it and I'm interested to see how you're going to fill out the events and Kagome's relationship with Sesshoumaru.  Keep up the good work :) 
      
Hello, 
I like this story...it is well done...I can't wait to see what happens next... 
      
i love it i hope that oyu countinue it 
      
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OH MY GOD!!! I LOVE IT!  PLEASE CONTINUE.  I CANN"T WAIT. 
      
0o0o0o0o0o0o i loves this~! 
      
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