Great start so far. The only thing I wish is that it would have been a bit different from the character-settings as the other thousands of stories. Like Sango is always Kagome´s best friends, why can´t it be someone else like Kikyou? The Sesshoumaru and Kagura pairing and her being the cheat is also nothing new, you could have chosen another female or created your own character. 
What I´m trying to say is that your story is well written but it´s already too similar to any other fic. If you want to be different then you could have already started with a different setting and characters, who are often times overlooked like Kanna, Hakudoshi, Ginta, Hakkaku and so on. What I like is that it´s Kouga who is Kagome´s ex and not Inuyasha. That´s so overused it´s not even funny anymore. 
      
amy (Chapter 1) -  Thu 27 Jan 2011 
GREAT START, MORE! 
      
I like it so far! Though, I don't think Sesshomaru knows what he's getting himself into.  I see some very amusing scene's in the future ;) 
      
I loved it....  A lot different than the others but promising all the same affects as your other stories.....  Update soon. 
      
I usually like to leave thoughtful, good reviews. However I'm really having a hard time thinking of words that aren't  'Please update soon! I am already addicted to your story' 
  
But that's exactly what I'm thinking and wanting to say C: 
  
I like how you wrote this story, and introduced the characters and their previous history with relationships. The chapter flowed nicely, and I also like the interaction between characters. Very well written.  
  
Also- I like how you made it Kouga that Kagome broke up with, not Inuyasha. Good chance of pace. I'm looking forward to the next chapter C: Keep up the good work!! 
      
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