This was a very lovely story. Keep up the good work.
gyahhh!!!! such a good story, no, not good but an amazing story... it made me crying over and over again everytimes i red it...
This was such a good story.
Karli (Chapter 5) - Mon 09 Jan 2012
This was truely amazing i am glad you shared this story
Wow that was a great story I wish I had such a story truly it was amazing I loved the way you made it. It was so simple yet compelling all at the same time. Truly gifted writing!!
Clayr (Chapter 5) - Sun 24 Oct 2010
the end is making me cry
Koki (Chapter 5) - Sat 14 Mar 2009
That last chapter made me want to cry =( [not that the others didn't have those moments too]. This was really good, I greatly enjoyed it.
Koki (Chapter 5) - Sat 14 Mar 2009
That last chapter made me want to cry =( [not that the others didn't have those moments too]. This was really good, I greatly enjoyed it.
cjflutterbye (Chapter 5) - Sun 17 Aug 2008
| You have a lovely story here. Very touching. My only question is why was Sesshoumaru in that house in the first place? Overwhelming guilt? Was he always looking out for her? - I suppose it doesn't really matter, he was there, and they are friends. You did good.
knifethrower (Chapter 1) - Thu 24 Jul 2008
| this is an awesome fic, very moving
Asuka (Chapter 5) - Fri 11 Jul 2008
| It was a good ending but I expected more. like sess explanation.. It is a very well written piece though.
Lunaticneko (Chapter 5) - Mon 07 Jul 2008
| I loved your story, definitely had me tearing up at parts.Good job.
| Wonderful. Just absolutely wonderful. Very dramatic and very touching of the soul. You have a gift--a rare one at that. Your gift is one of great writing. Meaning, that your writing can touch even the coldest of souls. I really enjoyed your story, and about cried during one of the chapters.
Ja ne.
tina (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Jul 2008
| oh WOW !! please do a follow up
Kim (Chapter 4) - Sun 29 Jun 2008
| I love your story. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
trinity3000 (Chapter 4) - Sun 29 Jun 2008
| I love this story so much that I tracked down the finished product on FF.net (I'm not very patient I guess.) This is one of the more original fanfics that I have read.
Tajia (Chapter 4) - Sun 29 Jun 2008
| Nice Story FireFalcon, and you are doing a very excellent job of updating, thank you for that, it means a lot to those who are stuck on your story.....You have me hooked....is Sesshomaru changing his voice so that she does not recognize him? Great job!
| Nicely done...please update soon.
*hugs and smiles*
| I meant to add 'fascinating' also.
Aimee (Chapter 2) - Tue 24 Jun 2008
| I like this, it's like someone telling you the story, and I love the longer chapters, more story less clicky xD very good job. =)
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