I usually read romance, but so far I like this. Maybe steal a bit of fluf in there somewhere and it will be perfect :D

I hate cliff hangers...but on the up side this story sure is getting exciting C= 

lmao I had a feeling that what he was wearing something like inuyashas for some reason. its the only logical thing. 

Now I really cant wait for the next chapter. 

lol aw you welcome. I really do enjoy ur story, the way it just flows so naturally, makes it that much more fun to read. C= 

Oh! Mean place to stop! Please update soon! I'm intrested to se where you go wiht this. =)

Hope yo had a great Mother's Day!

~~Mizuko~~

I didnt think we'd get to the exciting parts this quick!!!! ? Falling slowly in love with this story. C=

Cant wait to see what else happens....

oooh! I love mythology. very detailed, interesting  prologue. lol I feel like somethings going to go wrong with the passing of the fluff, and something bad will happen. keep going!

Wow this i really something. I love the direction this story seems to be going. C= Cant wait for the next update! 

Most intreging.... Please update soon!

Have a great week (and happy Mother's Day!)

~~Mizuko~~