This is a good start, keep going and watch out for perspective change and be careful of tenses.
loli (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
great start cannot wait to read more
Teresa (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
I like it so far and it has great potential. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.
Allison (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
Sounds pretty interesting. I really hope you continue with the story.
Loved this chapter!!!!! I cant wait for things to develop from here, that baby is so damn adorable.
A Real Fan (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Jun 2011
Nice so far...please update soon. I want to see where you take this.
toni (Chapter 2) - Tue 31 May 2011
Good so far! whats the rating?
Not bad on the chapter. I like the way you made Sess' and Kagome's characters. Great start, let's see how it develops.
Ritska (Chapter 2) - Tue 31 May 2011
I like your story ^-^
KT (Chapter 2) - Tue 31 May 2011
AWww I wonder how kaogme will end up becoming the new nanny or even how she ends up taking care of the young pup. It will be very interesting... especiallhy their encounter. i can't wait!
mika (Chapter 2) - Tue 31 May 2011
I really like your story so far. I can't wait until they meet.
pinkslytherin (Chapter 2) - Tue 31 May 2011
the story is amazing! i cannot wait for the chapter where they meet to come!!
sara (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 May 2011
It´s O.K. though too short to say more.
Interesting chapter!!! Baby sounds so cute. I loved the beginning, cant wait for more.
It has potential. I'll wait for the next chapter.
Serenad (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 May 2011
This looks very promising! I can't wait to read the next chapter, thank you!
Crimson~Rose (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 May 2011
Please do continue. It's off to a great start ^^ can't wait to read more
amy (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 May 2011
I love it ,keep going to the end with fast updates!
pinkslytherin (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 May 2011
love this! i wonder how he will meet kagome! i cant wait for the story to continue!
miki (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 May 2011
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