Again, another awesome chapter! I love the creepiness that involves the picture. I can't wait for more! There was one thing that I did notice. You really like to write in passive form. Sometimes passive for is nessessary, but sometimes I feel like the writing can get a little repetitive and boring when people use it too much. But this is just my opinion, and I'm not a writer at all. A lot of people do prefer writers who write in passive form often. But update soon, because I really like this chapter!

Creepy!! But I love it. I cant wait for more!

I love it! It's getting so mysterious...!

Whoo! Wonderful comeback fic, Jasmine! It's a great start and I loved it. Lots of potential, as always and definitely eager to see where this goes! There aren't enough horror/thriller/mystery SessKag stories out there and I definitely love this one already.

I love this- it's intriguing and just a hint chilling, a wonderful way to start!  I can't wait to see an update.

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Woah. This was good! A few spelling mistakes, but overall this gave me a the hibbie geebies. I really like it so far, and I'm excieted about where you're going to take this. Update soon!

Oooo Miss Teak, thi is starting off really good!! I love stories that have a paranormal/thriller edge to them. And this story is starting off on the right foot, cant wait til the next chapter!

I'm liking this new story~ So mysterious, I can't wait what happens next!