AWWWWWW! Again you wow me with another great story! too bad its only a one shot. it would be a great full story. but i sill love it! It is still one of my favorites. Keep up the great work! you rule!!! LOL
suniko
Diane (Chapter 1) - Sun 17 Jul 2011
Like it overall, slight correction here; He tried to resist the argue to read it. Argue is a verbal fight I think you ment urge instead. Also gaping only has 1 p.
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