I like this one!! Its very nice! I did find any spelling error and overall didn't find anything you would need to fixs! Great job!!! 
      
Ikaru (Chapter 1) -  Thu 23 Apr 2009 
| interesting......i suppose that is one way to keep a man coming back for more, she plays the fetish game well...an enjoyable read, good job!!
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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