I hope more is to come from this story I love to see another update ASAP. You are keeping everyone form the cannon as best Ic as you can and it was great reading. I look forward to more ASAP.

Sincerely,

Authoress smcandy

cool :) this story's nice too :D very intersting i really want to know whats going to happen... Die Zuki! lol

I love your story.  I like the idea of Kagome being forced on a quest with someone she hates for the sake of her own revenge.  I think you did a very good job of creating an enemy that has a hidden agenda.  You express the emotion of the characters with complexity and realism.  I look forward to more of your epic story.

Nice story, I'm liking a lot until now. Seems really promising, I'm curious to know how this progress!

Kagome indeed looks a little selfish, but I think we can blame it on the shock of her friends and Inuyasha's deaths. Hope she gets around. Sess is great!

Great work!

i really like the plot of the story, and that they are in character, however i think kagome seems a little selfish when it comes to inuyasha, after all he killed his friends, rin and the villagers and yet she wanted him to be saved at all cost.