| Likw 'tina' said it is a very innteresting start, a good, but you do need a beat but the grammatical erros are not that noticible and i did enjoy it. i hope you update soon.Thanx!
~*Twilight*~
Aurora (Chapter 3) - Thu 07 Aug 2008
| Update Soon Plz!!
HeartSpasm (Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Jul 2008
| This is cute so far but you definitely should look into getting a beta. Your chapter has a lot of grammatical and spelling errors that distract readers from enjoying your story (which they want to do!). Keep up the good work!
nya_24n (Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Jul 2008
| This is to cute!
tina (Chapter 1) - Mon 28 Jul 2008
| its a very interesting start , I do hope to see your updates soon I would like to see where your going to go with this
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