:blinks: So no one is going to tell Kagome what happened? O_o oh. THAT will be interesting. Fun to see Sesshomaru act on it in his way regardless. And the other youkai apparently can't argue him that much. Wonder what will happen when Sango wakes?

hm... I wonder if Kagome's father is being controlled in some way? I blame Naraku! Alight... so that's not fair... but given his actions and thoughts thus far it's a justifiable hypothesis.

Thanks for writing.

hahaha! Sesshomaru caused Sango to pass out!! I wouldn't have expected Sesshomaru to accept a claim of Kagome's so soon... even (or especially) as she has no idea what she just invoked.

Very fun chapter. It leaves and raises many questions but hopefully those will be answered. Perhaps more now that Sesshomaru has accepted Kagome's claim. That whole "maybe tell her when they're alone" thing could be very informative.

Hm... Kouga's not going to be thrilled about the claiming. Poor guy. :pats Kouga:

I really should offer my services as beta... :sighs: If I could trust my consistency I would but clearly I disappeared for over two months so it wouldn't be right. It's just... you have such a wonderful story and it's a down-right SHAME that many would overlook it due to the errors within.

Thanks for writing.

I just started reading this yeaterday and I love it I can't wait to see the outcome. thanks for wrighting.

Keep it coming.

*Palmface while laughing hysterically*

Meanwhile in the background Koga is frothing at the mouth because he is restraining himself.

And all the while Kagome is utterly and completely confused, and Sesshy is probably quite pleased. Shippo, do everyone a favor, and tell her when no one else is looking XD

OMFG!!!! This was getting soooo good! I can't wait for the next update. I wonder now that the claim is known what will happen?

so goood! i love ur story and cant wait for more!

sssssssssssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i likey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

KAR

Oh ho ho ho. .......Yes. 

Keep it coming.

I have had a wonderful time reading this fic. If you ever meted some one to proof your story, please let me know. I look forward to reading the next chapter. 

Stop Stopping! You're making me cry here!

I love the story you have going so far! 

Also. In Chapter 11 in your quote you spelled beet like the tuber when you meant beat like beat the drum

*omq omq omq...!!!!! What just happened!?!?!?!? O.O I KnOW I'm missinq somethinq!!!! Urqqqh

Nextchappieplease!:) thanks!*

Poor Sesshy, he's so conflicted that I can feel a headache just wondering how all his thoughts aren't driving him crazy.

This is definately one of my favourite stories. I cannot wait for your next update. Update soon please (:

:D  I can't wait to read more!  Kagome is such a sweet person.  Poor Sesshoumaru!  He will find happiness!!

Keep it coming.

Hi!! first, great story! I am really enjoying it.

However as you stated in your opening you do seem to have troubles with a few words.

I'd like to give you some little bits of advice that may be of help.

their  -  used when talking about people

there - places  about 90%of the time you are using their not there.

wear - wearing clothes etc...95% of the time you should be using this one not the next one.

ware - things that are being sold.

cloth(s)  - material, bolts of fabric etc...

clothes - things you wear to cover up! ;)

Good luck with the rest of the story, I'm looking forward to it!

:)

love <3

*simply wowwww.o.O keep doinq what your doinq... Im sure you've made your qrandmother proud.:)*