Hot intense man you did an awesome job, you had me sucked in from the being and provide perfect description that I felt more like I was watching this more then reading and it made my breath catch in a few place and i forgot to breate because it was so intense. You didan amazing job writing this totally a favorite. 
      
joyouki (Chapter 1) -  Tue 01 May 2012 
A big juicy WOW! Love it 
      
Hot, dark and awesome!!! Being bad never felt so good, go Kagome!  
      
i freaking love it!  :3 
      
It might just be me, but I like this. Then again... I've failed at writing fluffy and warm for as long as I can remember so I might just like this because while it is much better then most of what I've written it is something that I would have tried. Very nice, if they had a rating system I would give you a 9.5/10. Good job. 
      
Intense smut! While I enjoyed it there was just so much emotion and choas in the air when I read it, I think you did a really good job of illustrating the struggle for them to be together but also to distance themselves from each other. :) 
      
I absolutely LOVE this...i want more of it lol.  I just soooooo goood. and i love smut tehe!  Fabulous job deary. 
  
-MoR- 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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