Hmmm... I wonder what Kagome's mother could be hiding?? I can't wait for the nect installment. :) Update soon please!
I like how descriptive you are, makes a vivid picture :) 
  
The only little thing that had me confused is Dr. Perry's speech. It is a little difficult to understand where the speech ends and action starts.  
      
that was definitly a twist. lol I wonder what's gonne happen next. i can't wait!!! And thank you again, so so so much for this chapter! :) <3 
      
More please!! Update soon!!!! 
      
I love it! the detail is wonderful! I can almost imagine actually being in an asylum. 
      
Interesting. Although there is another story (VERY different) by the same name, so I clicked on this one because of that.  I would like to read more. :) 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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