Pointless smut is often fun, but that just... it felt lacking. Oh that reminds me, you have a continutiy error near the beginning. You talk about her being pushed onto her back then two paragraphs later without any mention of a position change she's seemingly on her stomach. Just thought I'd point that out. 
      
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. 
      
TKE (Chapter 1) -  Thu 26 Jul 2012 
Definitely a way to spend a sleepless night..lol!! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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