Love this story when I frist get to read it. I was sad tht you did not up date after the last chapter. I hope that you will read this and start to rewrite again.  Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. (On Hands and Knees)
Interesting story. I hope you decide to continue it!  
You have a few word useage mistakes etc... but if you find a beta, I'm sure those will be taken care of ! Hard to find when you 
read your own work, so if possiable, grab a beta and I hope the story gets even better! 
  
Looking forward to the rest, 
Zoku  
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Very interesting... please update soon 
      
AnightsDream (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Aug 2012 
This story is amazing! I was on edge waiting for Sesshomaru's appearance! Awesome! 
      
Vale (Chapter 7) -  Tue 14 Aug 2012 
I wish to thank you for this wonderful story..... Mixing two of my favourite mangas?   Yeah, hell.... Both thumbs up! 
      
I'm glad you posed this story on dokuga, I read this story on fanfiction. Keep it coming. 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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