It was great, I really loved it. Hope Therese the next chapter pretty soon. :) 
      
Summer.Manion (Chapter 1) - Wed 22 May 2013 
 I love it more more PLZ...PLZ... 
     Have a good day. 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
A little rushed maybe add some details for i was very lost but from what i could understand was okay you beed to put more thiught into it anything other thanthat was sparklingly gorgeus. I see potential get a beta and start working oN it the plot is very interesting but kinda moody 
TaTa~~JuicyJoose 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
Keep it coming. 
      
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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