This story really has me curious. Like what's happening between Kagome and Sesshomaru, and what does Sesshomaru what if not what his father wants?

I really like the begging, and I'm eager to see where you take it!

On a side note: the story would be a little easier to read if you separated the dialouge. Everytime a new character speaks it needs to be in a new paragraph. for example:

instead of this "blah. blah, blah" said person one. "blehblahblu" said person two.

You would do this:

"Blahblahblah"

"blehblabloo"

Again, I cant wait to see where you take this!