Very nice! Very nice indeed!
As always, great work my dear!
Hello Sunset,
what a nice story to the theme Ladies Choice. It made me smile and I think it has just the right timing.^___^
Thank you
Stardust
\o/ that was great
Very warm and fluffy. Not sure about the whole 'dancing in front of the fire' thing, but it somehow fit. Great work :)
This was sweet and beautifully done!
Phyllis (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Oct 2012
Wow, I don't usually like oneshots, as I crave more, but this was remarkable! I loved how you played up the rivalry between the brothers, and the love between the demon and the miko. I especially love the buildup where she takes off the layers of her kimono. Beautifully done! I wish there was more, but you've done so well with just one. Great job!
COAIM (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Oct 2012
Ohh, i like :) how cute.
The conversation during the strip tease was so romantic, and sexy. Bravo!
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